martes, 12 de junio de 2018

Portfolio 5, The Thesis Statement


         The thesis statement is the claim your essay supports and it must include of a topic, a precise opinion and reasoning. It explains where you are going and how you are going to get there.

        Thesis statements have three parts:
1) SUBJECT (topic) 2) PRECISE OPINION (opinion on subject) 3) BLUEPRINT OF REASON (evidence)
The blueprint of reason will only be effective if: 1) Each point is explained in the body paragraphs
2) Examples are provided  

        Another view on the parts of the thesis statements imply knowing:
1) THE TOPIC
2) YOUR CLAIM
3) REASONS FOR SUPPORTING YOUR CLAIM

Portfolio 4 - Parts of the paragraph





Parts of the paragraph
.Topic sentence -What is the subject?
                             -Interesting topic
                             -Giving an opinion on it
                             -Not overly detailed
.Body –Supporting details for the argument
           -Order details according importance (stronger points first) or a chronological order
Closing sentence- Restate the topic sentence in a different way
                              - Keep the audience thinking



LLearn english with alex / (2009 may, 19) / Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction / Retrieved from https://youtu.be/cCuExRE6N-4





EExamples of topic sentences:



       1) Although the interpretation of traffic signals may seem highly standardized, close observation reveals regional variations across this country, distinguishing the East Coast from Central Canada and the West as surely as dominant dialects or political inclinations


I      In Montreal, a flashing red traffic light instructs drivers to careen even more wildly through intersections heavily populated with pedestrians and oncoming vehicles. In startling contrast, an amber light in Calgary warns drivers to scream to a halt on the off chance that there might be a pedestrian within 500 meters who might consider crossing at some unspecified time within the current day. In my home town in New Brunswick, finally, traffic lights (along with painted lines and posted speed limits) do not apply to tractors, all terrain vehicles, or pickup trucks, which together account for most vehicles on the road. In fact, were any observant Canadian dropped from an alien space vessel at an unspecified intersection anywhere in this vast land, he or she could almost certainly orient him-or-herself according to the surrounding traffic patterns.



      2) We commonly look on the discipline of war as vastly more rigid than any discipline necessary in time of peace, but this is an error. 


TThe strictest military discipline imaginable is still looser than that prevailing in the average assembly-line. The soldier, at worst, is still able to exercise the highest conceivable functions of freedom -- that is, he or she is permitted to steal and to kill. No discipline prevailing in peace gives him or her anything remotely resembling this. The soldier is, in war, in the position of a free adult; in peace he or she is almost always in the position of a child. In war all things are excused by success, even violations of discipline. In peace, speaking generally, success is inconceivable except as a function of discipline.


       3) Many politicians deplore the passing of the old family-sized farm, but I'm not so sure.


 I I saw around Velva a release from what was like slavery to the tyrannical soil, release from the ignorance that darkens the soul and from the loneliness that corrodes it. In this generation my Velva friends have rejoined the general American society that their pioneering fathers left behind when they first made the barren trek in the days of the wheat rush. As I sit here in Washington writing this, I can feel their nearness.



University of Ottawa, The Writing Centre- Writing paragraphs / Review topic sentences (citation needed)

Portfolio 3 - Speech acts



Some signs can either describe a situation (“park closes at 6 pm”) or command an action (“no running”)

Constatives are sentences that describe something as true or false (IS)

Performatives are sentences that are meant to inspire action (DOES) – words in themselves are actions: SPEECH ACTS

-Actions include but are not limited to: ordering, promising, apologising, warning, sentencing, christening, marrying
-Speech acts depend on reception, there are felicity conditions through which the performative can be enacted (performatives should have proper authority, be understood, clear and able to be executed)
-There is no certainty that the orders imparted through speech acts will be followed


Portfolio 2 Advice on academic writing (in progress)

Portfolio 1 - Welcome

Welcome to my little world!